Sela Locke

As usual, you keep the reader interested, curious, and at the end of the chapter, all they want is to scroll up and find more of story, waiting to be ...

Overall, I think you really overdid the 'EXTREMELY GORGEOUS ANGELBOY' thing. I mean, the idea of angels being so much like humans (and this might just be me, Catholic and ...

I found it hard on the eyes, if only because you kept switching from the speech and phrases of the eighteenth/nineteenth century to that of the present. Examples? “My pardons, ...

To answer not only your story, but also your latest post, Night Mistress, re-writing isn't enough if you're not improving, and you can't improve unless you a) read lots of ...

I'm not really one to nitpick, so I won't try to here. It seems a lot of people are having this problem right now - on YWS, anyhow. They make ...

I've noticed the others've have got most of the nitpicks, and I don't like nitpicking anyhow, so... (;)) This idea was actually really intriguing. To have her stuck somewhere and ...

The mere idea of understanding this gives me a headache. Not only does the grammar make Aunt Josephine want to jump out The Wide Window, but such a plot I've ...

I agree with Becki, you gave away a lot for just a prologue, not to mention a short one. I think the whole idea of angels falling in love is ...

Firstly, I want to point out that every single bit of dialogue doesn't need to be tagged. Lemme show you what I mean: “Tayla told me. I’m her younger brother, ...

I think the people above me have gotten most of the nitpicks, and if they haven't, you should be able to, with a read-over or two. The lack of commas, ...

Hey tharr, reviewer Sela, reportin' fer duty. I must warn you I don't like to nitpick, so if you're looking for a lot of grammar mistakes pointed out, you're not ...

It was okay, if there wasn't supposed to be much action or plot or point. The writing was good, and I'd nitpick on the grammar, but other's'll get to that, ...

I'm sure my fellow reviewers have nitpicked enough, so let me just say - I loved it. I'm not one to laugh aloud, but it certainly amused me. I have ...

Good grief, Nu! Whatever happened to happiness - Kyle is like a freakopsychocreepyhooglyfranderburglarman - er, boy, that is. Ugh. Otherwise. Best. Thing. Ever. Jenny, Pierce, and the kid with the ...

I'm gonna keep this short, one, because I don't like to nitpick, and two, because I... don't have a lot to say. xD Now, the vampire romances in general? I ...